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Body Check (New York Blades, #1)Body Check by Deirdre Martin

My rating: 2 of 5 stars



I brought my book from work home with me to finish this weekend. There wasn't much left to read, and I had suffered enough. The book was Body Check by Deirdre Martin--a contemporary romance and the first set in her "New York Blades" series.

Janna MacNeil is a publicist who's been hired by the new owners of the New York Blades to come in and help clean up the image of hockey's bad boys. Ty Gallagher is the captain of the team. He brought the Stanley Cup to New York last year, and he's determined to do so again this year. Hockey is his life, and he has no time for publicity stunts, photo opportunities, or charity work. Janna knows if she can get the team captain to fall into line, the rest of the players will follow suit. She and Ty inevitably butt heads, but even their professional animosity can't diminish their growing attraction to one another.

I don't read much contemporary romance any longer, but I kept this one because of the hockey angle. It was disappointing. While it's obvious Ms Martin knows the game of hockey, it's equally obvious she has no concept of the spirit of hockey. Hockey players, at any level, are famous for their generosity, kind hearts, and charitable work. None of them needs to be browbeaten into it. Furthermore, the team captain knows that public relations come with the honor of wearing a 'C' on his uniform. Any player who is unwilling to step into that role would decline the captaincy.

More griping under the cut )

Okay, now that I got all that off my chest, what really soured me on the book was Spoiler alert and trigger warning )

And another thing, Spoiler )

Favorite line: "You'll be amazed at how quickly the universe will catch you if you're willing to fall."

Characters were fully realized, it was fun to follow the Blades through their season, and the plot progressed in an orderly fashion. Doesn't matter, hated it. I think I may have another book or two by this author, and right now, I'm not sure I'll bother reading them. Two stars.
chez_jae: (Books)
Yesterday, I brought my work book home, and I finished it last night. It was The Penalty Box by Deirdre Martin.

Katie Fisher used to be bullied in school, because she was overweight and brainy. Paul van Dorn was the high school hockey star who went on to play in the NHL. Now, Katie is back in town to work on her book and to help her mother take care of her nephew, while Paul has returned after injury cut his playing career short. He now owns and operates the local bar, The Penalty Box. The two of them meet up again at their high school reunion, and neither can forget the other.

They begin dating, but Katie wants to keep things on the down low, for fear people will believe Paul is favoring her nephew, whose hockey team he coaches. Katie is afraid of falling for Paul, because she can't wait to leave her small hometown behind once more and return to her career in academia. Paul is reliving his glory days at the bar and dodging the unwelcome advances of the town barracuda, Liz Flaherty. Liz was Katie's biggest tormentor in school, and she continues in that vein as she tries to win Paul over.

The story was interesting and had a lot going on, what with Katie's sister Mina being in rehab, Liz and her evil machinations, Katie making friends with former classmates, and the inevitable clashes between Katie's desire to keep their affair a secret, and Paul's rather public persona. I liked the hockey back drop, although I wanted to body check the author for misspelling Conn Smythe. Gah!

While the book was enjoyable for the most part, the ending fell flat on its face. It was far too rushed, and too much was left unresolved. I rolled my eyes when I finished, and that's not a good way to end a book.

Favorite lines:
So here she was, dressed to the teeth and wearing more makeup than a drag queen at Mardi Gras.
"At least I wasn't naked. If this were a sitcom, I would have been naked."

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