felaine: (stompy boots)
felaine ([personal profile] felaine) wrote in [personal profile] chez_jae 2024-09-07 07:48 pm (UTC)

Mistakes like that in editing are so distracting.
Cat Clove repeats would annoy me too.
It's unfortunate because good autumn and Halloween mood settings I love.
Maybe if the next line after "murder" was:

Time for decaf
It might work.

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